Tuesday 29 March 2016

Third Edit - Isolation

After a screen of verbal feedback from my class/teacher I received a lot of positive comments as well as areas to improve:

  • Cut some of the shots where he is waking up/walking down the stairs.
  • Cut the shot where he says "don't we look alike" as it takes away the seriousness of the film.
  • The typography fits in well with the style i'm trying to create.
  • The editing choice to mix the flashbacks/dream has a positive effect and made the audience understand the narrative well.
  • Composition of the shots are stylish.
  • I have a range of filming techniques that have been used effectively. 
  • The audio creates a more suspense atmosphere.

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