First Cut

This is my first cut i am with the footage that I have filmed and created as well as the whole black and white 'film noir' influenced theme works really well with the idea of my short film however I do know that they are a lot of improvements that need to make, such as the jittering and bluriness needs to be added to make the narrative easier to understand for the audience. Along with the audio needs to be fixed as at the moment  even though my persona's voice is clear on the audio, the background noise is also very dominant however once i have the music in the background or whatever audio i decide to have in the background it will make the short film a lot better quality.