- Cut some of the shots where he is waking up/walking down the stairs.
- Cut the shot where he says "don't we look alike" as it takes away the seriousness of the film.
- The typography fits in well with the style i'm trying to create.
- The editing choice to mix the flashbacks/dream has a positive effect and made the audience understand the narrative well.
- Composition of the shots are stylish.
- I have a range of filming techniques that have been used effectively.
- The audio creates a more suspense atmosphere.
Tuesday, 29 March 2016
Third Edit - Isolation
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